Our Garden Tower Poem by Minx Videsben

Our Garden Tower



Rotten strawberries,
among dying white flowers

Our garden was perfect,
until you built that tower

But after the sunset,
that took away my breath

I forgot why I hated,
everything you made

Then after that storm came,
that washed the garden away

That tower still stood there,
and featured my nightmares

Yet nobody noticed how sick I seemed,
or how my petals had started wilting

All my fruit had rotted away,
and soon my mind had started to fade

But I could still find peace,
from that view you made

I'd stay there all day,
every second a waist

And little did I know,
that I'd spend my whole life there

I boarded myself up,
and our eyes never met again

Friday, February 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak,lost love,love,royalty,tragedy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A queen who had a garden, and let her king build a tower in the center. She despised the tower, believing it ruined the view and was the cause for the plants dying. She resented her king. But he took her up the tower and showed her the spectacular view it held. She resented him a little less. But one night a strong storm swept over the kingdom, washing away any crops and drowning a few livestock. But worst of all it washed away the queens garden. The queen went into a depression. First losing her child, then her husband to his work, and now the one thing that kept her stable. Her garden. She grew quiet, and mean. But one day she climbed up the tower, to see the view again. After that she seemed to never leave the tower again. Servants brought her a chair, then food, then a bed. She seemed to live there now. Her king grew tired with worry, his subjects grew loud with gossip. She only ever looked out the window, even when her king visited her, she didn't even acknowledge he was in the room. She never left the bed, and at some point she boarded up the door with furniture. She died in that bed, forever looking out at that view. Leaving her ghost to look at it for eternity.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rod Mendieta 05 March 2017

The images of the tower in the middle of a garden and the narrator wasting away like a withering tree are very compelling. I think in the fifth line from the last one you meant waste, not waist.

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