Thoughts Poem by Minx Videsben

Thoughts

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Yesterday I woke up and wished that I was dead
But today when I woke up I heard voices in my head
The nights are getting longer, the days are getting shorter
I wish I wasn't alive, yeah, I wish I ain't your daughter
I wish I had no daddy, no mommy and no sister
I wish I wasn't ever born and never did existed
But here I am right now, wasting all this time
To do something I should've done when the thought had first arrived
Everyday I'm thinking, 'y'all be better off without me'
I think about me swinging from the ceiling with a blue face
Why I always feeling like I'm losing in a damn race
Why is it so hard to realize, yeah, this is my life's fate
I think about me putting up a gun right to my head
Pulling the trigger, nobody noticed that I'm dead
I know that it ain't right, I know that it's all wrong
But then again, so am I, so why is this still going on

Monday, August 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: death,suicide
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
um this kind of is a rap? ? like when i thought of it i was thinking of a beat and makin sure it all rhymes to it yknow, , i wouldve actually made it a song but i didnt so it'll just sit here until then
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 August 2017

Feeling moment of death or suicide provokes thought. Thought which comes in mind amazes entirely. This triggers. An amazing poem is shared here.10

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 August 2017

I wish I wasn't ever born and never did existed I think about me swinging from the ceiling with a blue face I know that it ain't right, I know that it's all wrong.. hold on to this thought that such thinking is not right, it is bad...... then after sometime u may get over such thoughts.. go to Christ, and believe Christ loves you above all. you are vry very important to Christ....... prayers help us in such moments.. thank you for this poem. God bless you always. tony

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