Cosmic Dreamer

Rookie - 24 Points (12/04/1966 / The Cosmos...)

Our Last Dance - Poem by Cosmic Dreamer

All the memories of you eternally etched into my soul,
Once you made me smile yet now only tears flow.
What happened to us? We were loves young dream,
Were we meant to fail so badly? I just don't understand.
Once we were as one, yet now apart from one another,
It seems an eternity since we had a civil word together.
I notice the new spring in your step, the new beat of life,
Do you still hurt as I do for what we were?
Do you still care that we may have squandered nirvana?
Did I light the flame of bitterness that lives within your heart?
I dare not look at you for fear of what I have created,
I wonder if we can turn back the clock and be what we once were?
Whilst deep in my heart I know... We have danced our last dance...
Spread the love... The peace will follow...


Comments about Our Last Dance by Cosmic Dreamer

  • Unwritten Soul (11/30/2011 5:26:00 AM)


    Last dance, maybe you dissolved in space, full of memory, listened to melancholy music along as you move..where the steps done in perfect same not a mistake one (when heart broken) ...If the great thing was happen and if you dancing again...never finish the dance, keep the last one to be done for one time...the time that the last day for the last step you to dance...for last breathe where the dance utterly always in heart_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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  • (11/29/2011 6:27:00 PM)


    wonderful write - such emotion- 'flame of bitterness' love the imagery! great job! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 29, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 30, 2011


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