Cosmic Dreamer

Rookie - 24 Points (12/04/1966 / The Cosmos...)

Heaven Is Hell - Poem by Cosmic Dreamer

As I walk down a golden paved highway,
The sound of angels song fills my ears,
I dance amidst the couds that surround me,
A vision of paradise stretches out before me,
I breathe in life from all of my surroundings,
I have died and become an immortal,
Golden haloed angels have become my company,
Blooms of lush flowers and birdsong surround,
And in this paradise I search for you my love,
I call out your name, yet you do not answer,
My past lifes lived must have been sinful indeed,
Where my crimes against humanity so unspeakable?
What sins must I have committed to deserve this?
For I have searched this never ending paradise,
And now I know heaven is hell... For you are not here...

Spread the love... The peace will follow...


Comments about Heaven Is Hell by Cosmic Dreamer

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/13/2015 10:06:00 AM)


    Verily, a lovely description........10 (Report) Reply

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  • Kim Barney (1/19/2015 6:32:00 PM)


    A hauntingly beautiful poem, but you meant to say WERE MY CRIMES, not WHERE MY CRIMES. (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (9/5/2014 9:50:00 PM)


    A beautiful poem describing the intense longing for beloved with a lovely vision of love and peace. Thanks for sharing this. (Report) Reply

  • (12/26/2011 12:55:00 AM)


    Great poem, i enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • (12/25/2011 9:22:00 PM)


    I dance amidst the couds that surround me,
    A vision of paradise stretches out before me,
    I breathe in life from all of my surroundings,
    I have died and become an immortal,

    Truly a phenomenal poem.
    (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/18/2011 6:26:00 AM)


    If love is here in this earth,
    'twill also be a paradise! ! !
    I love this poem! ! !
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  • Scotty Dogg (12/17/2011 11:59:00 PM)


    Are you in heaven or hell? I don't understand this poem. Who are you looking for? It's a nice poem, but I don't know what you are talking about. Why is the person not there? I want to understand. Scott. (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2011 3:12:00 PM)


    Loved it. A great poem. (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2011 3:08:00 PM)


    Amazing! Love your imagery! Really a beautiful poem! Every line is truly immaculate! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 16, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 18, 2011


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