Our Life Poem by Mary Amrutha

Our Life

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By the time we realise
why we are born
we will be at the last part of the play

By the time we realise
what is the purpose of our life
it will be like
being in the last position
with only one second left
to win the game

By the time we realise
whom we can trust and whom we cannot
our rein of life will be in the hands
of those who we cannot rely on

By the time we realise
why we are in this world
it will be our last choice
to choose the right way to life
but not knowing the way...

Sunday, March 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: LIFE
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Very enlightening phrases. It is like a shadows of truth in realization. Thumbs up Kindly visit my simple poems. Thank you

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Daniel Brick 11 April 2014

The realization we may not have enough time to complete our understanding of life before we have to check out is profoundly disturbing. But in a sense you're poem of realization warns us to prepare NOW because we only have the present moment. Once again poetry saves us by expressing a timely truth for us all.

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Hans Vr 31 March 2014

Deep reflections on the essence of life. Let us search for the ultimate meaning of life so intensely that we get a bit closer to it as early as possible Good poem

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Colleen Courtney 30 March 2014

Very true! Spend so much time wondering our purpose here and know deep down that the answer will only be shown when I pass from this life. Nicely written!

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Mary Amrutha

Mary Amrutha

Ernakulam, kerala, India
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