Our Love Poem by Debra Martin

Our Love



Is it because it's new that we feel the way we do
Or is it real and that's why we want to make a deal.

A deal of a lifetime just you and me surrounded by poetry
It's like a song that the birds sing in a tree,
it's like a flower which blooms suddenly.

Oh the many colours our love has taken
it leaves us speechless because it will not be forsaken.

We honor and trust the way we feel, that's why we made a deal
Were on the path of no return where will it lead were not concern

All we've ever wanted was a love so true,
now were no longer sad and blue.

Debra Martin

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aqeb Benazir 16 August 2011

nicely done! i agree with unwritten soul.

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Zainab Zaheen 16 August 2011

thats so true.. i truly feel what you have written.. keep it up

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Unwritten Soul 16 August 2011

Guess you really lost in beautiful emotion...like you said you just surrounded by poetry created by your feelings..i can feel that, coz u sharing the sense in this poem...it has great connection with you..it nice and i can say it's currently true happen in your day now :) _Unwritten Soul

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