Remarkable Poem by Debra Martin

Remarkable

Rating: 5.0


My Mom was Remarkable in every way
she loved her family and prayed they would be okay

She set an example for all her children to follow;
to continue the legacy of hard work and honor.

Her life was a portrait that I looked at every morning before I started my day
Now that I have children I want to help them on their way.

To continue the legacy that was passed on to me.
I will fulfill my mother's dream and destiny

The dream to be loving, strong, kind and true
even when I feel down and blue.

I will continue to carry the torch of her love with my head
held high because it's in her sweet love I abide.

I Love you Mommy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zainab Zaheen 16 August 2011

really lovely poem... hope you write more

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Aqeb Benazir 19 July 2011

this was really sensational and deeply filled with melting vivid sorrow. 'The dream to be loving, strong, kind and true even when I feel down and blue.' - that was an amazing thought. great work and i like the approach of your perspective of life and the value it carries within you towards your loved ones.

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Abdallah Gamal 18 July 2011

I loveeeeeeeeeeeee it so cute and sensible, , a beautiful pic full of colors of happiness mixed with fabulous imagination, , love ur work, , love and peace forever, , If there is a rate more than 10 it will be perfect cuz that poem deserves more than 10 but sry I didn't find a rate more than 10 :)

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