Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 817,047 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Our Love - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Our love

Our love
As I believe
Stood above all
With perfect call

Neither rain
Nor any pain
Could deter or maintain
And exert hold to retain

It found no parallel
But exceeded well
With whatever we had
It was understood and well read

The storm accompanied by dark clouds
Thundered loud
With lightening and heavy lashes
But we stood fearless

Take care of our love
And deliver
The desired result
As we have strength inbuilt

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2017 6:32:00 AM)

    1 Aman Pandey
    welcome aman pandey
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2017 1:44:00 AM)

    welcome Nur Aisyah
    1 mutual friend
    Friend
    Friends
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2017 1:28:00 AM)

    Take care of our love
    And deliver
    The desired result
    As we have strength inbuilt
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 1, 2017



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