Our Love Poem by Christal Carpenter

Our Love

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This poem is a little odd, but it represents the ups and downs of love. In order to read it correctly I have placed numbers in the order in which the lines should be read.

(8) our love.
(6) and tomorrow,
(4) and above.
(2) and over,
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(1) Take me under,
(3) below,
(5) today,
(7) forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christine Woodrich 14 November 2006

I'm not really sure I understand it, but it's definately a unique style.

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Howard Johnson 14 November 2006

Intresting mixture of numbers and words

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