Out With The Old Poem by Etienne Charilaou

Out With The Old



Nothing can be said to console
the one who now feels old;
whose world has been inherited
by younger visionaries bold.

By time and body betrayed;
his youth retreats to the sacred caves
of mind and heart;
each to be overthrown in turn;
till only his child's heart remains;
for that was his will to retain.

Then when death strips him of
old age - if he dies an old man;
his heart which is his soul now
becomes what it always was:
eternal, without age.

Some may reckon this a fairy tale.
And if that be true then still
will I hold onto my child's heart;
for if my life be only temporal,
then I am the victor,
with an unconquerable heart.

Wednesday, September 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: growing old,heart,old age ,youth
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
‘The great man is he that does not lose his child's heart.' Mencius
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Reed 14 September 2016

I was drawn to this poem by it's title but I must say it exceeds all expectations in it's actual content. Brilliant and reaches so deeply. A wonderful cocktail of young and old and the human spirit all intertwined. Well done and thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2016

In old age death strips and this is thought provoking. Wonderful sharing!

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