Out With The Old Poem by Etienne Charilaou

Out With The Old



Nothing can be said to console
the one who now feels old;
whose world has been inherited
by younger visionaries bold.

By time and body betrayed;
his youth retreats to the sacred caves
of mind and heart;
each to be overthrown in turn;
till only his child's heart remains;
for that was his will to retain.

Then when death strips him of
old age - if he dies an old man;
his heart which is his soul now
becomes what it always was:
eternal, without age.

Some may reckon this a fairy tale.
And if that be true then still
will I hold onto my child's heart;
for if my life be only temporal,
then I am the victor,
with an unconquerable heart.

Wednesday, September 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: old,child,fairy,heart
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
‘The great man is he that does not lose his child's heart.' Mencius
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Reed 14 September 2016

I was drawn to this poem by it's title but I must say it exceeds all expectations in it's actual content. Brilliant and reaches so deeply. A wonderful cocktail of young and old and the human spirit all intertwined. Well done and thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2016

In old age death strips and this is thought provoking. Wonderful sharing!

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