Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 741,126 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Over The Demise - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I wept over the demise of friend
It was normal and not tragic end
Normally we mourn the death
And wait for recovery till last breath

What do we all remember?
If he is not family member
Yet he is missed by you all
We regret the disappearance of soul

Some of the good things are striking
As he was always joking
Making us lighter by few movements
And sometimes by funny comments

He used to drop in any time
Night or day was no bar for him to come
He may come at lunch or dinner timing
And spend the beautiful evening

He has sense of humor
That attracted me most forever
He never felt shame or downward
He used to offer encouraging words

He was with me since childhood
Almost together we stayed in neighborhood
He was never a stranger
With me he was brother and passenger too

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/25/2014 9:30:00 PM)

    Dear Hasmukh ji, losing a dear friend, particularly one you have known from very young days, is a very poignant moment in life. This leaves you shattered and it takes long to come to terms with it. This sadness is brought out well in this poem. Regards,



    GSP Rao, Hyderabad
    Mar 25,2014
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/25/2014 9:29:00 PM)

    Dear Hasmukh ji, losing a dear friend, particularly one you have known from very young days, is a very poignant moment in life. This leaves you shattered and it takes long to come to terms with it. This sadness is brought out well in this poem. Regards,



    GSP Rao, Hyderabad
    Mar 25,2014
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  • Yash Shinde (3/24/2014 11:28:00 PM)

    ...over the past years, neighbor-neighbor relations have become quite tasteless, and have lost that care and trust, within all this its great to know that, you are sad over demise of your friend..........great work sir (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/24/2014 11:13:00 AM)

    great

    Deandrea Jackson15 minutes ago
    keep up the great work
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/24/2014 11:12:00 AM)

    good


    Cheryl Harvey14 minutes ago
    good
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/24/2014 11:05:00 AM)

    welcome Persian Khushi and JaiRam Tiwari like this.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/24/2014 10:50:00 AM)

    I wept over the demise of friend
    It was normal and not tragic end
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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 25, 2014


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