Colin Ian Jeffery

Silver Star - 3,160 Points (Redhill Hospital)

Over The Top - Poem by Colin Ian Jeffery

Going over the top in World War One was when soldiers climbed from their trench to attack enemy trenches. At the battle of the Somme a British general ordered his men to walk towards the German trenches and not run. " We don't want the enemy to think we British are cowards." Thousands died because of his command.

Birds no longer sing
Where young men cower in trenches
Rifle with bayonet fixed
Wondering if they will live or die
Wanting the comfort of a mother's kiss.

Officers blow whistles
Brigade climb out of trenches
Walking over shell craters through barbwire
On towards waiting machine gunners
Surmounting terrors that make men mad.

There is no sound
But beating of each soldier's heart
As he steps forward into hell
Trying to control his fears and panic
Thinking of his loved ones back home.

Machine gunners open up
With chatter of bullets raking the ranks
Noise is deafening, screams as men are hit and fall
Wounded struggling in the mud
And for the dead grieving mothers to mourn.

Topic(s) of this poem: war

Comments about Over The Top by Colin Ian Jeffery

  • (8/4/2014 5:53:00 AM)

    The silence against the sounds. The live and dead. The awful contrasts of warfare (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 27, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 24, 2016

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