Overcome Poem by Joyce Hemsley

Overcome

Rating: 2.8


Forty words - He to She:
(Style of Thomas Hardy)

Your beauty is supreme,
leaving me wondering:
Is this all a dream?

Your glow is like the Venus star
'oh moon of love' is what you are.
Your soul, a crown ~ a diadem,
and I... the proudest of all men.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Margaret Atkinson 05 June 2009

'your beauty is supreme, leaving me wondering: Is this all a dream? ' ah-mazing beautiful a perfect 10 keep writing

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Joyce Hemsley

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Portsmouth England
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