ivy skies

Pain

I am caught in a steel trap
Of my own manufacture,
Fractured,
Tearing my own flesh
With dull teeth
Unable to escape
My own choises
The voices calling my name
Cut my heart to pieces
One with a razors bite
The other with silk
And sweetness

Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 13, 2009
Poem Edited: Monday, December 28, 2009

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  • Aurora Bell (9/14/2009 3:23:00 PM)

    This is brilliant Ivy.
    Welcome to the club
    A x

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  • Vinod KumarVinod Kumar (9/14/2009 1:46:00 PM)

    Strong Ming... Tough Words, but the heart is simple, nice different work,10+

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (9/13/2009 12:00:00 PM)

    Rich in emotion my friend...you express your feeling well in this well thought out and delivered write....keep expressing

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