Melissa Barber

Rookie (April 11,1989 / Ohio)

Pain - Poem by Melissa Barber

You’re causing me pain
You’re in my head all the time
It’s causing me strain
When can I call you mine?

Can’t get your picture out of my mind
Especially your behind

I loved the way you looked at me
I loved the way you held my hand so tight
I was convinced it was love at first sight
Why did you runaway on me?
How could I’ve even let you go?

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (9/17/2006 6:57:00 PM)

    CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM....THIS PIECE IS GOOD..IT WOULD BE VERY FINE
    IF YOU FOUND A REPLACEMENT LINE FOR''especially your behind'...Make no mistake...i'm no prude...the line just does not belong with the decorum of this serious-themed Poem...Otherwise, i love it...Bpttom line...It's your Poem...Your Call''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 4, 2005



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