Pain and pleasure
mere states
Of undisciplined mind
Mere single pair
Of feel like children
Begotten by mother
nerve sensor-
Pain is the price
Of delivery
Be it an idea
Or invention,
Pleasure the bonus.
Very well written, your ability to draw the reader in with such a short write is of brilliance...well done best wishes Jon
Very good insight on something which can be debated for ages.... Please write more.. looking forward to it.
Your poem elicits deep thought... it cannot be dismissed. Thank You.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Probing into the meaning of existence