indira babbellapati

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Pain In Aquarium - Poem by indira babbellapati

Raw pain
Didn’t you touch
With your eyes?

Spread all over

No, not your eyes
The pain!

Memory archives
Cutting pain
Darting like
In my ancient aquarium!

Comments about Pain In Aquarium by indira babbellapati

  • Brian Jani (6/23/2014 4:31:00 AM)

    Nicely detained poem, keep up the superb poetry (Report)Reply

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  • Leonard Dabydeen (11/29/2011 10:42:00 PM)

    Acute imagery of pain. Intense. A good write. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 23, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 23, 2011

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