Friday, February 9, 2007

Pain = Pleasure? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rough is the way you like it
Tender is not enough
Faster and faster
Harder and harder
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Ted Sheridan
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Dee Daffodil 09 February 2007

Ok...this one is intriguing! The reader could easily take two or three different directions from this poem. I think my preference is that you coose to no longer be someone's whipping boy, but that there is still a sense of longing and a feeling of loss. Correct me please if I have misread this one...it's actually very deep. Hugs, Dee

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