Saturday, January 12, 2019

Painted Smile Comments

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You can't see her soul weeping
She paints on a smile with delicate precision
A deep red to match her bleeding heart
Its part of her daily ritual to fool those closest
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Jennifer Birchall
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Richard D Remler 22 April 2019

sad but honest. We're usually blind to the things others go through, especially the difficult things. Penned skillfully and with meaning.

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Prabir Gayen 05 February 2019

Very beautiful poem dear poetess.....thanks

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Amir Marandi 18 January 2019

A vivid imagery of pain. Great poem. There are times that we are lost among the crowd and the only way to show our presence is to put a happy face on. A disguise to shield us from others. To shield us from reality.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 January 2019

A very poignant write. It vividly depicts the hurt and pain brought by the loss of love. Beautifully written.

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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