Pakizaah-Pure Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Pakizaah-Pure

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Pakizaah* as they call it for pure
I am very much sure
No such religion has existed
Where only purity is insisted

One1/10 of income for poor (for jyarat*) donation
Just deep feeling with relation,
I salute and admire great teaching
The only way open for reaching

What a way to observe fast in holy month?
To feel close in heart with nothing in mouth
Only prayers and good wishes for brethrens
For well being of others with all such concerns

I wish each and every word is followed
No ill wish is carried further or allowed
No religion teaches love lost game or hatred
Only peace at heart and silently to be lead

"Come to me I shall take care"
Leave everything and just pray for
I shall be there with you at every step
Such is the message for wrong doers as slap

I wish all the success for them in prayers
They are the real followers and conveyors
Follow the path with earnest and strong faith
I hope none can dare to threaten including death

*Pakizaah.. pure… *Zyarat.. donation

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 August 2012

Pakizaah* as they call it for pure I am very much sure

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 August 2012

Deon Van Red7 minutes ago i wish i could connect with this more and have witness their devotion. Strong faith is so rare and beautiful.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 August 2012

Muzzammil Shah Lots of thanks, Hasmukh Mehta for your nice comments that is a short poem itself.16 minutes ago via mobile · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 August 2012

Jon OtanoLess than a minute ago love it Comment 0 Truthful

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 August 2012

Johanna Groves2 minutes ago You sound truthful and faithful

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 August 2012

[View All Comments] 26 minutes ago « Delete » Panjai Simi. beautiful

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Pritpal Singh waheguru 7 minutes ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 August 2012

Muzzammil Shah Great poetic lines to express your ideas regarding religion, that teaches spreading peace and vanishes violence. Lots of thanks, Hasmukh Mehta. about a minute ago · Like

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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