Panchajanyam Blown Comments

Krishna! come along with 'Amruth'just now To protect us.Pretend to be friendly But in real hostile with kamsas to tow Them dead to.'Done hastily, Bespoken'-yes, your viewing eyes should show......such an impressive expression on Kamsas and Krishna. A beautiful poem is well executed. Thank you for sharing.

A sensible write with epic touch dear madam! “From so many kamsas here who row/Readily to dine merrily merrily/Over the innocents” Thank you so much for sharing!