Paradise Poem by Ray Hansell

Paradise

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Now, I never lived there
But I saw the destruction
It's going to take many years
And a whole lot of construction

To rebuild a town
Completely burned down
Survey the area and you'll see
Total devastation all around

So many lives lost
So many souls destroyed
In every life that lived there
There's now a huge void

Thousands of memories
Gone in a flash
All that's left behind
Are just piles of ash

Good honest people
No different from you and me
Were just living their lives
Happy and free

Burned out cars
Brick chimneys stand
Hopes have been diminished
In a once promised land

So many folks hopefully
Are going to rebuild
But will life in the future
Still hold the same thrills?

I hope somewhere down the road
This town will again rise
Out of the ashes
Reborn from demise

Prayers and hopes
Are with them each day
Hoping real soon
They'll return to the Paradise way

Tuesday, February 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: fires
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Not forgetting the people in California who were burned out of their homes.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spock The Vegan 04 February 2020

It's so sad. It's not all the power company's fault. My brother said there were arsonists. And the government's policies for forest management were much to blame too.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 February 2020

Thousands of memories are gone in a flash as destruction is noticed. This poem is very interestingly and nicely written. Thank you very much for sharing this poem with us.

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Ray Hansell

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