Sunday, February 4, 2007

Parting Comments

Rating: 4.5

No more to feel the revelry,
between hearts yours and mine,
or smell the scented rose
on the prickly vine.
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David Harris
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Duncan Wyllie 03 September 2007

Where something ends, something has just begun, there is a sense of this in this one David, Thankyou, your writing from the heart Love duncan X

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 11 March 2007

I think the bard sys it all... parting is such sweet sorrow... david 8

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Brian Dorn 04 February 2007

Nicely said, David... well worded and brilliantly composed. Good write! ! Brian

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Pam Thomas 04 February 2007

I enjoyed this poem very much it moved my heart. Thanks for sharing David. Pam

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