Parting Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Parting

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The red sun yielded to evening,
How should I spell out your parting?
The dark looked light fair when you were,
Bright days now look like nights darkling.
Imprints of your presence so rare
Carved is in heart, all your being,
Your absence would strike like lightning,
Pen on paper words feel wanting.
Emptiness peeping from rear view
From bike's backseat when I see you,
Fresh green blossoms from nowhere beam,
And now with then analysing,
Wonder if my life's swan could swim,
All frozen thoughts should start melting.
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Musings | 06.12.2017 |

Tuesday, February 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: lost,love,memories,parting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 February 2019

Excellent write. The opening line alone will move a reader to go through with the.whole write. All lines are very touching that have been woven to depict the heart rending effects of parting. " Your absence would strike like lightning." A beautiful line from a great poem. Superb imagery.10++++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 February 2019

I'm back after a week, and it is nice to read your warm feedback. Thank you Rose Marie.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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