Passing, Still Poem by David Taylor

Passing, Still

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He stood on the corner still
stood for what?
He stood still.
They passed by
passed by for what?
They passed
he looked
he looked at what?
They passed
saw not
his looking still.
He saw
their passing,
passing, still.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 14 February 2008

A cleverly woven piece David, Marvellous use of words, interacting together. Nice read indeed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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