Thursday, May 1, 2014

Passion, Purpose & Profession Comments

Rating: 5.0

When people talk of what to do
They say find your passion and stay with that
But for some others, their what to do
Is to find your purpose and go with that.
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Viola Akhigbe
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An unusual poem on identification of oneself, one's passions

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Congratulations, Viola. This poem was selected POEM OF THE DAY- MEMBERS, a couple of days back. A meter of pride for a young poet. Well done

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Bri Edwards 23 February 2023

Some people.....well, I guess I'll just stop commenting on this. 3-4 stars. ok,4, esp. as I think this poet may be worth looking at (her poetry I mean) more, so...

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Bri Edwards 23 February 2023

purpose, passion, and profession DON'T HAVE TO BE....'rolled into one'. If one can do it and be content (or even happy) doing it, fine for them! Lots of rhyming here which I like.

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Bri Edwards 23 February 2023

I think I shall aspire to becoming a , NOT an anatomical buttocks, but, instead ' Bum US/Canada 1. Pejorative for a homeless person, - especially one that makes no attempt to work or better himself'. Well, is age 74 too late to become one? : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 23 February 2023

line 3 has a GLARING (obvious) typo/misspelling: 'their' for 'there'. Right? Easy to do. bri ;)

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Kim Barney 23 February 2023

Wrong, Bri. Read carefully. 'Their' is the correct choice here.

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Rob Lamberton 23 February 2023

When profession encompasses passion and purpose, it's a great thing!

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 04 May 2014

I like the lucid imagery. Very well done.

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Gajanan Mishra 01 May 2014

very good writing, I like it, thanks. Please read my poems and comment.

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