Pastoral Verse On Swimming Experience Poem by Muzahidul Reza

Pastoral Verse On Swimming Experience

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How nice to swim in sea, river, lake and pond!
Floating body, pressing water, moving forward
How nice to enjoy spattering, splashing sound!
Gesturing body, flapping wing, clapping hand,

I remember once while swimming with friend
To cross the local river to go to enjoy local band
Where we saw the singers sang hand in hand
In sweet voice, shaking body, hair, opening mind,

On the way home longitudinally in river we swam
All the while we gossiped and made lots of fun
Then we dove, caught fishes, late we returned home
Many happy did return in every sun and moon,

Now, we swim paying money in swimming pool
And in artificial lake without lily though waterful
But funless swimming, charmless time passing
Though it is a game here with heavy contesting.

© Muzahidul Reza |10/8/2016

Pastoral Verse On Swimming Experience
Saturday, October 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: swimming
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 08 October 2016

charmless time passing, good one

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Ena Ena 03 May 2017

But funless swimming, charmless time passing Though it is a game here with heavy contesting.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 July 2017

I remember! ! To cross the local river! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Evi Evi 14 October 2017

Swimming Experience is a fantastic poem 10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 December 2018

very beautiful we in Canada also pay while swimming in beaches that's the order of the day Nice swimming but I am a non swimmer I swim in a tub with no water...lol u may lie to correct a typo lately? ? ? ? returned home

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Great Reader 13 February 2018

What an extraordinayr verse on pastoral background! Which reminds lots of past memories, love it, thank you poet

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Fiadh Fida 16 December 2017

Pastoral verse so wonderful, I did not know before, great piece of writings, thanks for sharing

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Robert Rhyme 29 October 2017

But funless swimming, charmless time passing, , , , , , wonderful written

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Muzahidul Reza 06 January 2018

Thanks a lot dear gret poet for your commenting

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Robert Rhyme 29 October 2017

Pastoral Verse On Swimming Experience a great poem on swimming experience, thanks for sharing,10

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Muzahidul Reza

Muzahidul Reza

Charaihatee; Mohangonj; Rajibpur.
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