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Sonnet - 01: My Heart Carries Out Order Is Under (Iambic Pentameter)

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My heart carries out order is under
My brain, a stout controller, powerful
Had planned a complex project earlier
Sending order to do as potential;
To circulate blood through artery net
Stimulating every tissue active,
To survive the life through exact effort
And to run up to the course is complete;
Since then my heart started doing the task
Pumping via trillions of miles and miles
Of way, narrow, marrow, all chaotic
To defend the life breaking all the piles;
But, life forever will leave my heart, brain
In motionless, finally derailed train.

Copyright © Muzahidul Reza | 10/02/2016

Sonnet - 01: My Heart Carries Out Order Is Under (Iambic Pentameter)
Sunday, October 2, 2016
Sonnet Poems: 12 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: heart,life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In Mortal Earth Living Beings' Lifespan
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Our Heart 27 January 2018

Our heart is our great part of body and it does the most important thing of whole body. It bialogically recieve blood and signs to do its duties a great poem, thanks great poet

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Nolken JIll 15 November 2017

But that life forever will leave my heart and brain One day in the motionless, finally derailed train. touching lines

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Nolken JIll 15 November 2017

Wonderful sonnet through it heart is truly portrait, thanks

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Emanuel Johnson 06 October 2017

A great sonnet, scientific based great poem 10

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Fiadh Fida 01 October 2017

This poem is also a great imagery tones philosophical theme, great done, dear poet, thanks

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Christina Maria 01 August 2021

Heart is very important organ in our body which performs the vital functions in our body we cannot live without it. Poet, your poem is a great arts and wisdom. It is a significant sonnet poem, thanks for sharing,

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Fiadh Fida 01 August 2021

Extraordinary on theme is composed this great sonnet. Our head is the controller of our heart and whole body, outstanding one,

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Elima Lima 01 August 2021

Scientific sonnet, full of information, wisdom, wonderful, indeed

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Elima Lima 01 August 2021

Scientific sonnet, full of information, wisdom, wonderful, indeed

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Elima Lima 01 August 2021

My heart that carries out order is a subordinator Of my brain, a controller, stoutand powerful, great done

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