Pathetic Rhyme Poem by Matt Mondschein

Pathetic Rhyme



Is it possible to have death
within life?
To suffer a tragedy,
deal with the strife
When a part of you dies
can you erase
the embarrassing times of shame and disgrace?
Do they understand
what you've been through?
Can the lack of experience
sympathize with you?
so many questions, so little time
to find the answers of this pathetic rhyme

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Lucero 22 December 2006

Matt, Count your blessings...don't feel bad, You speak your tale, for that be glad, Don't hold back, give words your best, The few words I've shared are not in jest Keep writing Matt, Ray

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Joshua Fegley 22 December 2006

To sympathize is one thing...but to empathize is another mate. Regardless, great poem... Death is the only guarantee we get in this life. Later.......

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