Thursday, August 14, 2008

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twinkles dots horizon
beneath fading moon
whispers garbled to be heard
prisoner of mystical urge
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Manonton Dalan
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Ency Bearis 14 August 2008

great verses...wonderful write...well done... Ency Bearis

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John Tiong Chunghoo 14 August 2008

lovely straightforward brickwork poem. keep on manonton.

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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