Pearls Poem by Salman Sayeed

Pearls

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Pearls are the best stones.
They are made in oysters in the oceans.
A pearl can be of any colour.
Without pearls, there wouldn't be any jewelry.
Pearls are the best stone.
Pearls are made from the oysters hard work.
The rich people of southern India are the one who.
Started harvesting pearls.

Thursday, March 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: pearls
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarifa Almas 23 April 2016

Beautifully penned with beautifully deep thought.. A well expressed poem with meaningful message.. A perfect 10 Salman..

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Jasbir Chatterjee 09 April 2016

very good poem! You are right. The oysters keep working hard quietly and we profit from their work. Apart from the oysters, people who harvest these pearls from the deep seas also suffer a lot of suffering and exploitation. They are made to work like slaves under sub-human conditions. When they are unable to work, they are simply dumped into the sea. This is as per an article I read recently.

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 05 March 2016

Oysters are simple beings that are capable of producing the most valuable gems like the pearls. Likewise all great and valuable things are created and produced by real deserving and hard working people. A great message in atrue beautiful poem. loved it sallu.

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Salman Sayeed 14 March 2016

Thank you so much

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 March 2016

Pearls are made from the oysters hard work. this is a hardwork no one sees or acknowledges. all little wonders of nature are like that..... they are simply there, they do their work and others profit from it. they go away silently. thank you for this thought provoking poem. tony

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Salman Sayeed 04 March 2016

Thank you Dr.tony Brahmin for commenting my poem. As you said its a resonable sound judgment. Now a days people use pretending action

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Aarzoo Mehek 04 March 2016

knowledge wrapped in these beautiful words. beautiful pearly poem.Welcome to poem hunter Salman. Keep writing and keep reading.10

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Salman Sayeed 04 March 2016

I really appreciated. Thank you so much Aarzoo Mehek mam for your good comment. Sure I will create my notion then I upload my poems. Thanks for expert advise

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