People Do Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

People Do

Rating: 5.0


Life has really no purpose
If some one offers no rose
If not a flowers then wishes
It must make everybody happy on face

It is one way to feel
And express happy will
That you care for people
And people reciprocate in return

Life is colorful garden
When flowers blossom even
Children make it heaven
In their presence we all feel fine

Life may seem dull
If you are not successful
In having single kid
Life may even be looked as clueless or dead

Someone must fill void
No one can feed
Or provide eternal happiness
Childless life is really gloomy phase

People do adopt child
Such step is nice and very kind
Parents feel of having parenthood
The real meaning is now understood

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 February 2014

Life has really no purpose If some one offers no rose

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Gajanan Mishra 24 February 2014

understanding real meaning of life, very good sir.10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 February 2014

Like 24 Feb by outcast to People do

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 February 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 February 2014

Thoughtful Levi Oguike36 minutes ago Nice Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 February 2014

keep writing Joslyn Mars38 minutes ago I think your content is good, but I can't catch the flow and it seems like you are missing a lot of words to make this make sense to the reader. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago in poetry not everything is weritten

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 February 2014

Like 5 minutes ago by outcast | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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