Perfect. Poem by Tom Allport

Perfect.



Sticks
Stones
Mud
Bricks
Concrete
Slate
Fixed together
They could make
A pretty little house
With a garden gate
Land
Sea
Fauna
Fire
Air
Flora
Found together
In a Goldilocks zone
The perfect place
We call home.

Friday, August 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: home
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 August 2019

Perfect place of home is well executed here, Beautiful poem is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Paul Brookes 30 August 2019

Our home is where they say the heart resides but that home can be a simple as a mud hut or as moderns as an eco house the home though is nothing without the people and that is when a house becomes a home great write 10+++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 August 2019

A wonderful thought in a wonderful form of a poem. l liked how it was crafted. It captured how, we, human beings built our homes in this perfect Mother Earth. A home within a home. Well crafted and conveyed write.

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