Perfect Cleaning Poem by Laura arwen

Perfect Cleaning

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I don't tolerate
dirt but I
have to live
as long as
I live with
someone
There's no choice
to have an
obsession on cleaning
I adore cleaning
because it relax
me
There are no
excuses to not
have perfect cleaning
The cleaning is
something you need
to do in
a normal life
The perfect cleaning
make a magic
and perfumed aura
in the house
The perfect cleaning
has got determined
rituals
The cleaning are
a pleasure and
a duty at
the same time
They are essential
for a better
and minimalist house
They must be
an unique thought
The cleaning are
indispensable to be
fresh and happy
I'm ridiculous to
think and aspire
to do the
perfect cleaning
When I'm angry
they are an
economic sedative
Maybe the cleaning
could become a
rigid obsession because
they are necessary
for a domestic
world
The cleaning aren't
a problem for
me

Friday, April 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: cleaning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 30 April 2016

It is a good habit to keep your surrounding clean. It gives pleasure and feel good to live in a clean place. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 April 2016

cleanliness is next to godliness......... it can become an obsession. psyhologists say it can be also an escape ritual from our own inner emotional problems.. very good poem on the desire to be clean.. thank you. tony

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