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Rating: 5.0

If my world were perfect
And we were all blind
And my love had fallen
Into this state of mind

Then life would be pointless
And heartless and cruel
And saying you care now
Makes me fight even harder

My life is shot now
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Asif Andalib 10 October 2008

A wonderful poem. But did you mean, 'My life is short now' by mentioning 'My life is shot now'? Thanks for sharing. A 10 from me.

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Joshua Decker 03 July 2008

very good poem. im sure we have all been there before, though some of us may not of left it.

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