Perpetual~ Ending Poem by Blessing Anastasia Abaka

Perpetual~ Ending

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Life is Perpetual, even after death.
On the voyage to my castle,
An idyllic thrive strive through my mind strength.
A tale of life after death battle
That can be easily perspicacious
But hard to subtle.

Living like the death, yet unconscious
Of the zillions challenges we all vouch for.
HATING with passion, yet prayed for mercy tenacious.
OF what heart can we sincerely plead for
When we are inebriate with hatred.

Our idiosyncrasy lays with the loon goddess.
It not yet dim to us because we are nude.
Thus, i know we known the truth.
We preach it, yet run away from being adjudge.

It's very ignoble to our mankind faith,
Putting a veto to our living
To penetrate through our mindset.
Dilute our conscious with bettering,
If not, our perpetual life will be consume with sins.
Idest, we must live with love.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
To our nations and all the those who are consume with living unjust.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernest Makuakua 26 January 2016

HATING with passion, yet prayed for mercy tenacious. OF what heart can we sincerely plead for When we are inebriate with hatred It's very ignoble to our mankind faith, Putting a veto to our living our perpetual life will be consume with sins. Idest, we must live with love. love it love, and i love it its beautifully written thank you for such a wonderful shared powerful piece

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Hazel Durham 05 April 2013

A beautiful poem with so much wisdom, I really enjoyed thid powerful poem!

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