Persevere Poem by Shaun Cronick

Persevere

Rating: 5.0


With every breath I take,
I fall a million miles.
I'll climb up and persevere,
Overcome all life's trials.

For nothing's ever simple,
It's so easy to give in.
Life is a constant battle,
To never lose but to win.

Saturday, November 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life,perseverance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 November 2019

Succinct yet compendious...Virtually flawless structural movement.Well done...[FjR; 19]

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Shaun Cronick 04 April 2020

Thank you Frank for your most generous and warmly welcomed comment sir. Any praise from a world-class poet is for me more valuable than gold. Take care Frank stay healthy. And I wish you well.

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