I gift to you,
A soothing dream.
A dream to cherish,
A dream to gleam.
You've suffered greatly,
Through life's endeavour.
This magic dream,
Is yours forever.
Copyright Shaun Cronick 2019. All Rights Reserved.
Jez you are so kind, thank you so much. And if you read this reply this poem has a sequel called A Magic Feather. I hope you enjoy that one as much as this one. Take care good Jez and your poems are and forever will be spellbinding. Malamat.
Sold! I'll take your poetic magical dream anytime…..thank you!
A beautiful and touching write. So tenderly and lovingly expressed. Yes, a wonderful dream can lighten life's burden. It can make our spirit soar. Very uplifting poem.
You've suffered greatly, Through life's endeavour. This magic dream, Is yours forever. Dream as a gift for all those who suffer. wonderful dear poet. tony
Thank you good Tony for your kind and gracious comment. Take care sir.
Rose Marie you are so gracious and kind. Your wondrous comments on my Poet Page really stuck a chord in me. I am so humbled and honoured to be among and around you and many more good people on this outstanding site. I will reply to all your comments l others. Soon I will post many poems that are too mammoth to just type in after a demanding day. One is about Audrey Hepburn called Eloquence. I hope you're a Audrey fan. I thank you so much dear Rose Marie. Take care.
A poem of kindness and compassion. To feel the pain of others and show them care is very heartwarming . Beautifully crafted and well conveyed.write.
I'm so sorry Julia it's not for sale.Perhaps one day I'll gift it to your good self as a well deserved reward for your outstanding poems. So be patient and tolerant and I'll mail it to you, recorded delivery of course. or maybe delivered by a pelican, owl or speedboat, the choice is yours. I'm glad you like it and thank you for your kind comment
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Wonderfully positive and taken.
Jane thank you for reading and commenting. All comments from your good self are welcomed and cherished. I thank you again Jane.