This Magic Dream Poem by Shaun Cronick

This Magic Dream

Rating: 5.0


I gift to you,
A soothing dream.
A dream to cherish,
A dream to gleam.

You've suffered greatly,
Through life's endeavour.
This magic dream,
Is yours forever.

Copyright Shaun Cronick 2019. All Rights Reserved.

Wednesday, July 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,forever,love,love and dreams,caring,love and friendship,love and life,magic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 31 July 2019

Wonderfully positive and taken.

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Shaun Cronick 03 August 2019

Jane thank you for reading and commenting. All comments from your good self are welcomed and cherished. I thank you again Jane.

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Shaun Cronick 06 August 2019

Jez you are so kind, thank you so much. And if you read this reply this poem has a sequel called A Magic Feather. I hope you enjoy that one as much as this one. Take care good Jez and your poems are and forever will be spellbinding. Malamat.

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Julia Luber 08 August 2019

Sold! I'll take your poetic magical dream anytime…..thank you!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 August 2020

A beautiful and touching write. So tenderly and lovingly expressed. Yes, a wonderful dream can lighten life's burden. It can make our spirit soar. Very uplifting poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 January 2020

You've suffered greatly, Through life's endeavour. This magic dream, Is yours forever. Dream as a gift for all those who suffer. wonderful dear poet. tony

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Shaun Cronick 03 January 2020

Thank you good Tony for your kind and gracious comment. Take care sir.

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Shaun Cronick 20 August 2019

Rose Marie you are so gracious and kind. Your wondrous comments on my Poet Page really stuck a chord in me. I am so humbled and honoured to be among and around you and many more good people on this outstanding site. I will reply to all your comments l others. Soon I will post many poems that are too mammoth to just type in after a demanding day. One is about Audrey Hepburn called Eloquence. I hope you're a Audrey fan. I thank you so much dear Rose Marie. Take care.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 August 2019

A poem of kindness and compassion. To feel the pain of others and show them care is very heartwarming . Beautifully crafted and well conveyed.write.

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Shaun Cronick 12 August 2019

I'm so sorry Julia it's not for sale.Perhaps one day I'll gift it to your good self as a well deserved reward for your outstanding poems. So be patient and tolerant and I'll mail it to you, recorded delivery of course. or maybe delivered by a pelican, owl or speedboat, the choice is yours. I'm glad you like it and thank you for your kind comment

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