Phantom Ship Poem by Sarah Ibrahim

Phantom Ship

Rating: 4.5


aimlessly standing alone
on top of a Black Stone

Tears frozen long time ago
Wind never Seem to blow

Sun and Moon standing Still
the Sea became disguised hell

No waves to break the stillness
and air is filled with illness

Wondering Souls around the shore
Running from the rotten Core

Humming the sadness song
that they've Sang for too Long

Their lips are chapped and Dry
No Cloud would answer their Cry

The Phantom ship is sailing by
But no guiding star in the Sky

Sailing around in an empty sea
Looking for a journey that will never be

Forever this picture will last
Caught between present and past...

Sarah Ibrahim ©

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Craig Anderson 31 July 2008

Mmm...a somewhat scary spooky piece that left me truly cold. A real descriptive tale of creaking timbers and a moaning wind came to my mind. Excellent piece. Regards. Craig.

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