Dark Room Poem by Sarah Ibrahim

Dark Room

Rating: 5.0


Tossing and turning in my bed
Thousand thoughts conquering my head

Things doesn't feel right anymore
Lots of things changed from before

Opened my heart with caution not to get hurt
Suddenly all my feelings got under the Dirt

I've been told Life is River that keeps on Rolling
But somewhere along the way i missed the Calling

Stumbling not wanting to fall
While I'm crossing darkness hall

No longer sure where to put my steps
While every Drop of courage within me slips

Lost the light of the flickering candle
Nothing around seems easy to handle

Standing in the middle of darkened room
Held to the floor with chains of gloom

Frozen. Unable to cry
As I lose it all in a Dark room
Under a moonless Sky

Sarah Ibrahim ©

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 16 June 2008

good poem i like it..........

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 17 June 2008

'Lost the light of the flickering candle Nothing around seems easy to handle'well done, thanks for sharing

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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 June 2008

Nice poem it is chosen words has brought fine tempo!

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Mehmet YILMAZLAR 02 September 2008

very goodd ; well down and rhytmic

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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 October 2008

A beautiful poem, amazing composition. 10+ for it.

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Rania H 23 February 2012

Frozen. Unable to cry As I lose it all in a Dark room Under a moonless Sky I loved that most

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Kesav Easwaran 20 April 2009

walking dazed in the darkness, mind...well, a good expressive write, Sarah...light is always there at the end of the tunnel...HIS light...10

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tara star 13 April 2009

True...but somtimes we get observed in darkness tht we ignore the light tht is ready to brighten our life, , , , thts why we should never lose hope no matter how tough is our life our faith and trust on Allah turn dark nights in to bright days.. overall very nice composition..keep it up....! i liked it

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 January 2009

Sometimes life becomes a dark room, a nightmare... but there is always a way out, always a door is lit up...!

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Liu-ai Thu Sheba 15 October 2008

very well described and theatrical

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