Pills Poem by David Longoria

Pills

Rating: 5.0


My life is being drain
After taking all these hits
Each time I can’t see straight
I wonder to myself “Am I okay?

I pop another pill
I take another hit
Each day I feel
I must do it again

I’m tired of these pills
And I’m tired of my life
All right now that would make me happy
Is to end my life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liliana Roman 16 March 2012

this is a beutiful poem. it is so sad but it was so blunt that i felt the words. i felt the longing and the pain. good write.

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(De Va) 09 November 2011

how sad you message, how great your talent, how simple words can reach out and touch the souls of others.....hugs n blessings...... Surrounding you with loving and healing blessings...

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 21 October 2011

wow ths is amazing great job ik how it feels

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Makenzi Betts 04 October 2011

love it.... keeeeep writing. your great at it<3

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