Never Coming Poem by David Longoria

Never Coming

Rating: 4.3


I don't know what to feel
My heart is cold and dead
My mind confused
Don't know what to do

Feel sad for many reasons
Happiness Love,
Two of the many things
I can not have

Eyes crying
Body dying
The sound of hope
Never quite coming

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Makenzi Betts 04 October 2011

it's both... mixed emotioned..... i love your poetry :) n this speaks to me.... it rele does: -p

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Liliana Roman 19 March 2012

i am in that state right now. i cant have happiness or love. and hope is that thing that never comes. its a bad state to be in.

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Valerie Dohren 22 February 2012

A great write, but very sad - is this you? You are too young to feel this way, life is ahead of you with many possibilities.

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 03 January 2012

something will be coming i learned the hard way and i am still learning that nothing is ever coming something is always coming it just on the way u see it and i guess i am seeing it in the wrong way!

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(De Va) 09 November 2011

This is a wonderful write, so touched my soul as I so relate...hugs n blessings

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Romeo Della Valle 28 October 2011

Keep walking tall through what seems to be a never ending path that eventually will take you to Success and Happiness! Time is on your side and worry no more because there is light at the end of the tunnel, my dear friend! You got both: talent and great feelings! Go honestly through that long path carrying a luggage with your Love and Hope and you will proudly reach your ultimate goal! 10+++ Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from NYC...

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