Playing Dot To Dot With The Stars, Poem by Not Long Left

Playing Dot To Dot With The Stars,

Rating: 4.5


as a child,
when the sky at night,
seemed more clear,
i would, with my chocolate.
smelling fingers,
play dot to dot with the stars,
now,
at night,
the is sky less bright,
i play find a star,
from within the smog.
Was the sky more clear back then,
or was my imigination less suppressed.
Sometimes i watch my kids,
frolicking for hours with water,
at times i want to sumberge myself,
in the watery delight of there fun,
but then i find myself thinking,
of the water bill.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
kskdnj sajn 05 January 2006

Really liked the poem and the desire to live in playful and peaceful world with the conclusion of reality. As a child...I always said the poem to the first star I had seen...'Hope' I may... 'Hope' I might...until the end, because I worried if I said wish...I already used it up. Thanks for the opportunity to reminice. :)

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