Please Poem by Nom Nom Nom

Please

Rating: 5.0


Have you ever held a blade?
Loved what you made?
I have to be honest, it wasn't everything;
it made my wrists sting;
but I liked it more;
then falling hard to the floor;

I've never thought of suicide in my life;
I barely use a knife;
I used a blade;
that I made;
got my hands on a exacto-knife tonight;
feeling powerful, feeling alright;
I love you, I'll miss you;
goodbye feelings that weren''t true;
one more before I close my eyes;
cheers to those horrible lies;
one more.. one more goodbye;
please don't cry;
I'll stay strong for you and I;
and keep us both from wanting to die...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
<3 Nom Nom Nom <3 04 January 2012

Thank you VIPINS PUTHOORAN! ! =) Plus you're right, all other attitudes must be changed, but sometimes people need a helping hand; this poem is that =)

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Vipins Puthooran 04 January 2012

God gifted us this life to live here! ! ! ! ! All other attitudes must be changed! ! ! A good poem! ! ! ! Well-kwritten! ! !

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