Sunday, September 13, 2009

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I ask for the sun,
all right warm,
not to say hot,
I ask for the sun
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Maria Barbara Korynt
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Ian Bowen 16 September 2009

Just about as bad as bad can be. The broken English in this poem makes me cringe.

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