Please About... Poem by Maria Barbara Korynt

Please About...



I ask for the sun,
all right warm,
not to say hot,
I ask for the sun
because
I am fed up with a rain!

thank you very much
for the wind,
that me is pushing.
and the rain, which it
is beating - it's raining.
I will go crazy!

how it longer will last.
so, I ask for the sun,
it can be warm,
because,
I have my heart
very hot.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 16 September 2009

Just about as bad as bad can be. The broken English in this poem makes me cringe.

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