Please About... Poem by Maria Barbara Korynt

Please About...



I ask for the sun,
all right warm,
not to say hot,
I ask for the sun
because
I am fed up with a rain!

thank you very much
for the wind,
that me is pushing.
and the rain, which it
is beating - it's raining.
I will go crazy!

how it longer will last.
so, I ask for the sun,
it can be warm,
because,
I have my heart
very hot.

Sunday, September 13, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: sun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 16 September 2009

Just about as bad as bad can be. The broken English in this poem makes me cringe.

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