Thursday, February 23, 2012

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Another lonely night and I don't know what to do
I've lost everything including you.
I look out the window and gaze at the sky
Recalling memories of you and I.
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Young Church Poetry 24 February 2012

Beautiful poem, we must never let pride get in our way of asking forgiveness to the people we love. Especially our future husbands and wives, beautiful work.

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Rajendran Muthiah 23 February 2012

A fdulous writing indeed! Painful emotions are expressed beautifully

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