Please Live Poem by Amanda Edwards

Please Live

Rating: 5.0


Oh come now
It’s the time to stop swirling
Need to start living
A beautiful full life
Leave all the pain behind
Smile
Because you’re still alive
I don’t mean to preach
I just think life should be lived
Don’t listen to the cruel remarks
You are whatever you want
No judgment from moi
Always remember
What a incredibly, beautiful person you are
Everything else will fall into place
So please stop swirling
And live

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ronald Stroman 23 November 2007

i told myself that... just the other day. i said: ronald, stop whining. nobody cares if you get get hit, crossin' the street when you're watchin' the green light, fool. you're old enough too know to watch the cars, lights don't run you over, fool. P.S. some fools deserve what they got, when they keep doin' what they doin'. they keep gettin' what they got! ! ! take care, Amanda.

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