Karima Puzon

Rookie - 0 Points (September 18,1991 / Philippines)

Please Stay (I Hate You) - Poem by Karima Puzon

I hate you
Like the lightning hits a tree
I hate you
Like my computer breaks down to pieces
I hate you
Like my ice cream has melted away....

But why do I feel so different?
I feel like i want you to stay with me forever...
Like I don't want you to leave...

You crushed my heart and soul..
You make me feel like..
i dont want to see tomorrow...

Yet you make me feel alive...
at the same time am dying inside...

You make me smile..
Yet i feel so confuse....

Why is this happening to me....

Why do i hate you so much..
But i want you to stay...

I hate you
Please stay...


Comments about Please Stay (I Hate You) by Karima Puzon

  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (10/16/2008 4:04:00 AM)

    contrasting emotion, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , (Report)Reply

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  • Shy Powder (10/14/2008 6:57:00 PM)

    there must be something you love about them.. i read in the writing area of poems that you wanted advice on how to write poetry better, my advice is to read others, and be flexable with words, but i am not so good with poetry, i just love it, and well, dont know anything about it :) (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 13, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, November 3, 2008


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