Unwritten Soul


Bouquet Of Words - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Don't ask me what is friend?
What is love? Where it lies in?
Well definition, most of us confused
With the sweet of love juice
As love has chain to fuse
Grab this love that i lend
Love is not only for a lover
Love also made for a friend
and great love for God
Beautiful loves are broad

Dear, love of friend...
like the blessing rain
to fall on dry and hot desert
then raise a nice feeling
grow green, life in desert
sweet, beautiful and blessed...

A True friend, a true hand to lend
Sweet and thick like honey
Nothing with money
Hate to hate
Love to love
Not love to hate
Or hate to love

Losing a friend
Losing an element of light
Losing a different sight
Still can see with normal light
But missing core of value inside

A True friend
Share one color in life canvas
Surround by true friends
Finished a priceless of life canvas
With multiple colors trend

Simply, deeply thanks to say
You are my good friend ever
Makes everyday is a beautiful day
We stay in field of innocent forever

: : : : : : : : : : : : : : Theme: Friendship: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
Re.edited and a 2nd version of love and friend,
Dedicated 'To all my friends here'
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Comments about Bouquet Of Words by Unwritten Soul

  • (9/13/2017 3:02:00 PM)


    Hi dear, I came here again when I saw this poem in top 500 poem. :) (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul (9/14/2017 6:44:00 AM)

    Are you sure my dear? they must refer it, another poem but same title..but my beautiful fragrant flowers are for you and my great friends :) i love each of you for all support...till the end of time, no matter if it not in top 500 poem. great persons that i know alway topped in my heart...so this all for you friends!

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  • (9/1/2017 9:12:00 PM)


    Like a bouquet of flowers, perfume for the senses! Excellent write, Soul! (Report) Reply

  • Adilson Pinto (8/6/2017 6:35:00 AM)


    This poem really echants me... Philosophical and poetical words for our hearts! It's wonderful to know that there is someone who writes something like this! Always and always - congratulations my dear friend! (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul (8/7/2017 7:14:00 AM)

    Thank you :) i have no idea how to reply and to say this to you but i truly feel touched if you can feel what i have inside when i read it. Although my life is not that bad, not that good...but one of what makes me feel proud of my life is to have great people wherever i go. regardless how bad people scattered around but we only need few great ones that make us rise...True people will keep us high along its way, like a hot ballon does...Even here i saw many great friends like you and all below that keep supporting me with bejeweled words..Thanks dear!

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (7/31/2017 10:31:00 AM)


    Dear Soul, you have aptly brought the defination of love as a love to God, love for lover, love for friend and as in broad sense. However the love for friend here is most captivating, touching and thrilling. You have put here a nice paint on true frienddhip which brings ecstatic to heart and mind. Let me quote here some lines..
    A True friend
    Share one color in life canvas
    Surround by true friends
    Finished a priceless of life canvas
    With multiple colors trend. Whole poem is euphemistically composed. Thanks for sharing.
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    Unwritten Soul (8/7/2017 7:11:00 AM)

    Thank you dear Sir, what should i say than to appreciate who make our life colourful....I appreciate your kindness and lovely words with humbled heart! :) thanks

  • Simone Inez Harriman (7/13/2017 3:33:00 PM)


    A lovely poem of friendship and every stanza a drop of sweet nectar. Your poem is a colourful canvas, a priceless masterpiece...beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • (7/13/2017 5:44:00 AM)


    Friendship is a lifelong blessing.found in a school play ground and going on and on and onnnnnnnnnnn. (Report) Reply

  • Rebecca Navarre (11/3/2016 11:02:00 PM)


    OH! ! ! How Truly Precious! ! ! ! So Beautifully Written And Felt! ! ! ! Words So True! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    10+S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank You S Much For Sharing With ALL! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1
    (Report) Reply

  • (8/20/2016 2:34:00 PM)


    you are right, and we can't tell everything in the definition of love. to be a part of love, it is beautiful. very nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Christopher Tye (7/26/2016 9:48:00 AM)


    A really wonderful poem, without friendship the world is a desolate place. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/13/2016 10:01:00 AM)


    Love also made for a friend! Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • Ruby Mostazir (6/24/2015 10:21:00 AM)


    Losing a friend
    Losing an element of light....true.wonderful poem! I enjoyed it :)
    (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (8/16/2014 12:09:00 AM)


    A nice elaboration of widened love and friendship which I cherished from your penning (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (5/4/2014 12:32:00 AM)


    As long as day will follow night
    blessings shine with moring light
    and those blessing shall not end
    as long as words can find a friend.
    (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/17/2014 8:33:00 PM)


    impregnated with the ink of friendship. Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Mohabeer Beeharry (8/21/2013 6:25:00 AM)


    I am still looking for that ideal friend.
    One I could trust.
    This I find only in God. I have done my time of trusting
    But this definitely a lovely poem.like it

    Mohabeer Beeharry

    Read my poems sometimes and comment.
    (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/16/2013 2:33:00 PM)


    loosing a friend is like missing a core of value inside. Beautiful write..Loved reading each lines...Each lines describe the value of friendship...Yes, a true friendship is based on innocence....so well said..
    Beautiful poem..Inspiring one...

    Thank you for all the valuable and inspiring comments for my poems... Thanks a lot....
    (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (7/28/2013 12:33:00 AM)


    Losing a friend
    Losing an element of light
    Losing a different sight
    Still can see with normal light
    But missing core of value inside
    (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (7/28/2013 12:32:00 AM)


    Dear, love of friend...
    like the blessing rain
    to fall on dry and hot desert
    then raise a nice feeling
    grow green, life in desert
    sweet, beautiful and blessed...
    (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (7/5/2013 7:13:00 PM)


    very swt.i liked it.
    Simply, deeply thanks to say
    You are my good friend ever
    Makes everyday is a beautiful day
    We stay in field of innocent forever
    (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (6/19/2013 7:18:00 PM)


    universal friendship is a wonderful feeling. lovely (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 17, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 8, 2012


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