Bouquet Of Words Poem by Unwritten Soul

Bouquet Of Words

Rating: 4.6


Don't ask me what is friend?
What is love? Where it lies in?
Well definition, most of us confused
With the sweet of love juice
As love has chain to fuse
Grab this love that i lend
Love is not only for a lover
Love also made for a friend
and great love for God
Beautiful loves are broad

Dear, love of friend...
like the blessing rain
to fall on dry and hot desert
then raise a nice feeling
grow green, life in desert
sweet, beautiful and blessed...

A True friend, a true hand to lend
Sweet and thick like honey
Nothing with money
Hate to hate
Love to love
Not love to hate
Or hate to love

Losing a friend
Losing an element of light
Losing a different sight
Still can see with normal light
But missing core of value inside

A True friend
Share one color in life canvas
Surround by true friends
Finished a priceless of life canvas
With multiple colors trend

Simply, deeply thanks to say
You are my good friend ever
Makes everyday is a beautiful day
We stay in field of innocent forever

:::::::::::::: Theme: Friendship:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
Re.edited and a 2nd version of love and friend,
Dedicated 'To all my friends here'
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Bouquet Of Words
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Davis 06 April 2013

Studded with verbal gems! Work to be proud of, Soul.

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Kanav Justa 27 December 2012

You manage to write whatever is there in your mind... so well.... its like every thought is penned down.. no single thought is left.... nicee....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2017

Dear Soul, you have aptly brought the defination of love as a love to God, love for lover, love for friend and as in broad sense. However the love for friend here is most captivating, touching and thrilling. You have put here a nice paint on true frienddhip which brings ecstatic to heart and mind. Let me quote here some lines.. A True friend Share one color in life canvas Surround by true friends Finished a priceless of life canvas With multiple colors trend. Whole poem is euphemistically composed. Thanks for sharing.

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Unwritten Soul 07 August 2017

Thank you dear Sir, what should i say than to appreciate who make our life colourful....I appreciate your kindness and lovely words with humbled heart! :) thanks

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Adilson Pinto 06 August 2017

This poem really echants me... Philosophical and poetical words for our hearts! It's wonderful to know that there is someone who writes something like this! Always and always - congratulations my dear friend!

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Shreya Hacks 12 September 2020

Very well written...Wow and outstanding is an understatement. A True friend Share one color in life canvas Surround by true friends Finished a priceless of life canvas With multiple colors trend

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 March 2020

A True friend, a true hand to lend Sweet and thick like honey Nothing with money Hate to hate Love to love Not love to hate Or hate to love....../// beautiful poem penned on the usefulness of true friendship

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Mj Lemon 02 March 2020

The theme of lasting friendship really comes through in this verse, Soul. How it, a bond between friends, is connected to and often responsible for defining love is often either forgotten or just simply overlooked. This poem is magnificent, Soul.

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Denis Mair 10 January 2020

This reminds me of Shakespeare's line " LET ME NOT TO THE UNION OF TRUE MINDS ADMIT IMPEDIMENT." Indeed, the friendship illuminates our surroundings, as you describe. Perhaps this is because the soul is energized by connection with other souls. One can best discover the latent powers in one's own soul by reaching out to another soul. Your line " HATE TO HATE" reminds me of a poem I posted: ADDICTED TO EACH OTHER. I invite you to read it.

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Dev Anand 31 July 2018

Love is not only for a lover Love also made for a friend and great love for God Beautiful loves are broad. sweet desire to get into true friendship and enjoy it....... thank u dear poetess. dev

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